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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-11-08 09:37 PM





Viewable on video tape
seeable in a hall mirror
some shoot white rapids
others read a book
some do both
some argue by day
others love at night
some do both
some wake up easy
others get to sleep taut
all in the name of a days cycle
available on tape
viewable through a looking glass
seeable through rearview windows
together with other ugly and beautiful tales
stripped to their bare essentials
noticeable in a galactic lens
it may all be viewable
but for censor boards that clip away,
only the finished product is left to stay!





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myheart
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since 2004-11-05
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lost in your eyes
1 posted 2004-11-08 09:50 PM


it may all be viewable
but for censor boards that clip away,
only the finished product is left to stay!

You got that right!! Interesting read.

~myheart~

suthern
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Louisiana
2 posted 2004-11-09 08:58 AM


This reminds me of my own propensity for documenting occasions... and then wondering why. *G*

I enjoyed the read! *S*

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2004-11-09 09:09 AM


yes indeed my friend, yes indeed....
good write and thoughts....

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