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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2004-11-08 02:45 PM


Please don't be sad
and think that I am blue
it lies inside of me;
it's not because of you.
I can't explain it,
you've done nothing wrong
I guess I'm just tired
and I don't want to hear that song.
       You know the one...
about hearts not being true
He was just a dream
and I'm afraid you will be too.....


I'm not afraid to speak my heart
and bare my soul
I don't like lies,
I'd rather know the truth...what say you?  {Tritt/Mellencamp}

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2004-11-08 02:51 PM


Your rambling heart is always so full of heart...

May this dream be a pleasant one.


Linda

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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-11-08 02:53 PM



Short, sweet,
and definitely
to the quick...


Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2004-11-08 03:07 PM


thanks you two. you know, it's that little voice in the back of your mind that tells you...don't go there again.....

I dont listen to the voices often, but perhaps it might do me good to listen more often...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
4 posted 2004-11-08 03:08 PM


Hmmmm....a wonderful ramble!

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-11-08 03:08 PM


Sending hugs your way prerry lady!

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2004-11-08 03:10 PM


Marti, Nancy, thanks and hugs to both of you.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Cpat Hair
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7 posted 2004-11-08 04:32 PM


nicely done ma'am.. short and to the point.. capturing less a ramble, but an understanding..


myheart
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lost in your eyes
8 posted 2004-11-08 05:06 PM


Gentle Spirit, this is sad and lovely.
~myheart~

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2004-11-09 09:41 AM


Thanks Ron...and sometimes I still wonder if it's understood..  

myheart, thank you for stopping by.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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