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suthern
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0 posted 2004-11-08 01:27 PM


I'm reminded of an old country song
Where a woman sings about love gone wrong
She wails "I shaved my legs for this?"
And the listener knows she did not find bliss!
I feel so lucky to have found you
For you are first class in all you do
I'm always eager for our next date
However long it takes, you're worth the wait.
If she'd known you, the singer would have said
"Honey, you're so good - I would have shaved my head!"

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myheart
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1 posted 2004-11-08 01:32 PM


LOL. suthern, I needed a smile today and you have just given me one - thankyou.
~myheart~

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2 posted 2004-11-08 01:42 PM



Belle, you are downright precious! And may your shaving always be more than worth the effort!!! lol

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3 posted 2004-11-08 02:15 PM





Suthern, I think you've had a bit too much
of that morning tea!  LOL...this was too, too cute!

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4 posted 2004-11-09 08:33 AM


myheart: I wanted to give a smile with this... thank you for lettin me know I did! *S*

EA: Oh... yesssssssssssss. *G* He's worth a full body wax... even if the mere thought has me wincing! LOL Thank you! *S*

Sunshine... I dunno. *G* There are some things I just can't get enough of. *evil grin* Thank you! *S*

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5 posted 2004-11-09 01:53 PM


SuthernGal~
Now THIS ... this is classic YOU~
And ... it sounds like HE is worth a Bic Shaver or two~

Go girlie ... GO !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2004-11-09 02:01 PM


Great write!

Eric

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7 posted 2004-11-09 02:16 PM


grinning here, good one!  Enjoyed
JL
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8 posted 2004-11-09 04:29 PM


Heehee...
Silly, silly.

Enjoyed the chuckle.

JL

She said: ”You look cute in the dark.”


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9 posted 2004-11-09 04:33 PM


Girl, you are just too funny for words!
Hugs~

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10 posted 2004-11-09 05:19 PM


Well -- I hope he calls real soon! You a funny lady when you set your mind to it....and talented, even when you're bald.... or however you spell that....

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11 posted 2004-11-09 06:02 PM


Marge: At the very least! LOL Thank you, m’friend… I’m glad you liked! *S*

Ericc: Thank you so much! *S*

LeeJ: Grins are good… I’m glad this gave them! *S* Thank you!

JL: Thank you… I’m glad you enjoyed! *S*

Enchantress: I always wanted to leave someone speechless! LOL Thank you! *S*

Ratleader: LOL… from your mouth to God’s ears… for I hope so, too! LOL Thank you so much, kind sir! *S*

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12 posted 2004-11-09 06:15 PM


Now that's a keeper if you'll shave your whole head for him. Thanks for the smile
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13 posted 2004-11-10 09:07 AM


Suthern beloved one I like this so very muchly, you know I’m ROTFLMAO, Thank the Lord for Tena Lady, SI is such a hazard at my age

Love the flow of this and you surely made me laugh enough. Superb darling one, not How nice, how utterly, utterly excellent is this.  I love it muchly, no one does it like YOU, and does it with both style and content too

Love you always
like you forever
Mushy


Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
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14 posted 2004-11-10 09:08 AM


gal this is delightful and I must say that smile on you sure looks good!!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

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