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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-11-08 11:52 AM



One Wish Did Come True

Here I was wishing if only
I could be there with you
Can you imagine how I felt
When you came into view

As you started a new day
I was longing to be there
As I sat here watching you
I relaxed back in my chair

Being close, yet far away
One wish did come true
Felt like I was in your room
Sharing this time with you

We touched across miles
I absorbed all I could see
I felt each loving sensation
In you're secluded privacy

HopeĀ©2004

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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2004-11-08 11:58 AM


With an imagination as vivid and creative as yours, it is almost as good as actually being there with him in the flesh! ~ Well, "almost"!

~ May your daydreams become your reality!


Linda
Dream Kiss 2

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2004-11-08 12:10 PM


Thank you Linda , yes he sures stirs my imagination ... by the way , he did look good in the flesh

Hope

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-11-08 01:08 PM



That quiet time
can make it feel
just so...and you
portrayed the moment
beautifully!

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