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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2004-11-08 08:06 AM


Green grass looking on curiously unsure

Mid-afternoon light spilling across the day

Diving into the breeze reveals to contain
A buoyant power….

Train of magnetism, salivating consciousness

Spreading across the face of heartfelt sense

Curriculum of building a sailboat

Real with afterglow

Roaming far into a Baja fire

Eucalyptus warms the air

Looking for helpers with balmy centers

Consciously selected by passing any physical law

Circa 2004, induces pulse medium, with arms and legs

Unto the beginning altering temporal arrange

Affirming the release of the future

Like a mindless starfish, carries itself

Alive, ephemeral smoke

Nosing waves of the sea

Extending and picking up speed

Working in all dimensions

A privilege of the forgiven

Earning release, becoming the ocean

Becoming the perfection through affirmation

Inspiring gratitude, admiration…the favor
With expressional machinery…detectable substance

Touching many with no degree of fallacy or division

Making something with creation…

Suspension of closeness to others…

It’s beautiful, alive and panting with astonishing clarity

Profoundly moving….

Emanating from consciousness

Where impossible does not exist

Holding the hands of interpersonal nature

Literally unspeakable revelation

© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
1 posted 2004-11-08 08:34 AM


lee j..interesting journey here

and the font, strict, bold sharp edges
you just cook lady!!

MGROVES
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since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802
california
2 posted 2004-11-08 09:51 AM


i've missed your wise words
always a joy to read


Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2004-11-08 10:41 AM


When you create, you give us new doors to our world that allows us to see life and it's emotions in very splendid ways.  A treat to read you always.
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
4 posted 2004-11-08 04:33 PM


"Where impossible does not exist"

Now you're talkin'

Great one Lee J.

JL


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