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Day Blindness
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Day Blindness |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa 
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a culmination of past a birth of future a day written on skulls and written on a Mother to be there are 24 an octave in three parts harmony hours until it is somebody elses the form follows itself the letter becomes the word becomes the page becomes the book left for the immortal to read who tried and tried again and again and it will succeed finally to teach: we recieve we organise we transmit the nerve cells the nerve of the cells to be miniatures of us oh the arrogance that we can deny what is in front of our face what is alive? the being but what makes us human? the blindness no fools we |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
wow, such a striking write... and yes,blindness makes us human indeed |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
OOOOOO! I like this! " the book left for the immortal to read " and the rest of it too Nicely done! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent weave, Bri... the birth of the day... and how we grope about in wonder... Just excellent! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Simply awesome, simply bri bump |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautiful!!!! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and how I wish I could write like this...like fragments of dreams remembered, slowly unraveling an epiphany.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
a string of DNA . . . Beautiful Bri |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Have I told you lately that I love wallowing in your mind sibri?  Been a long time handsome, hope all is well! ~d Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yer gonna get some kinda cult following with this stuff dude...*grin* |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
brian "we recieve we organise we transmit the nerve cells the nerve of the cells to be miniatures of us oh the arrogance that we can deny what is in front of our face what is alive?" Always think when I read you...that's a good thing...thanks! |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Excellent....very much enjoyed ---------ice ><> |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
oh the arrogance that we can deny what is in front of our face what is alive? ******************** wow, leaves the reader somewhat shaken....great poem! **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"the nerve of the cells to be miniatures of us" and highlighting the essence.. yes, the nerve to be |
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