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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-11-08 12:27 PM



Reinvent the wheel
if to test the will
stretch that imagination
see fresh accords
untap unused resources
if to test fresh wheels
imagine untapped stretches
reinvent the musical test
if you will the recorded best...
one stands in silence
as though the world stood still
but there is room to reinvent
in the silence, stand storm of change
that made Edison aware of test range...
reinvent the wheel
test that imagination.



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J.Samm
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1 posted 2004-11-08 02:10 AM


makes a lot of sense...well written too
Krawdad
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2 posted 2004-11-08 02:24 AM


Out-of-the-box for sure.
Well, I haven't invented anything since summer, so my gloat has kinda wilted.

passing shadows
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3 posted 2004-11-08 05:16 AM


good stuff

a great way to start the day

ecrivan
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4 posted 2004-11-08 07:57 PM


a little tweaking of the last will to wheel here and away you go, good day to all!


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