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Three Part harmony within the voice of the wind
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Three Part harmony within the voice of the wind |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going 
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a trio of far off church bells shattered silence of the early night with three part harmony as the wind carried it past my ears i stood and took notice a smile was draped across my face everything was made alright within tose few moments and i welcomed the approaching night nice use of muffin |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
I have felt this before, the peace that comes in the ringing of church bells. Something old and sacred comforts us. You did a wonderful job with this. TD |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
I could feel your smile. Enjoyed the write. K |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ This is simply lovely~ Your title was the doormat that WELCOMED me enter the thoughts of you~ I am pleased I came~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Don_Juan Member
since 2004-04-08
Posts 252Far from where I am going |
Well i am glad that you all stopped by. thanks for reading and commenting nice use of muffin |
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