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Hallucination
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0 posted 2004-11-07 11:14 PM


“A Friend In You”
(23/10/04)© 2004 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

We would lay on them tin roofs every night,
Looking at the stars.
Dreaming ‘bout what we’d be when we grew up,
And now here we are.
Twenty years later, and it seems as nothing’s changed.
But, we both know it has, although one thing remains the same.

You’re still my brother, you’re still my friend.
And if that’s all it comes down to in the end,
I know what I’d do…
I’m glad I got a friend,
In you…

Then there were the time with the playground flood,
Man, we jumped right in.
People would just stare at two crazy kids,
Swimming and diving
Do you remember! Back then we were such a cast?
Me, you and the rest, how time’s been moving too fast.

But, you’re still my brother, you’re still my friend.
And if that’s all it comes down to in the end,
I know what I’d do…
I’m glad I got a friend,
In you…

You talk about settling down,
With the girl of your dreams.
While I still roam around town,
In a thick haze of schemes.
I have known you ever since,
My heart learned how to beat.
After these years I’m convinced,
A friend’s easier to make then to keep…

You’re still my brother, you’re still my friend.
And if that’s all it comes down to in the end,
I know what I’d do…
I’m glad I got a friend,
In you…

© Copyright 2004 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-11-07 11:38 PM


This is wonderful.  The rhyme is perfect, the presentation so very fresh.
Glad I got to read you.
TD

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2004-11-08 01:13 PM


Oh, do I have someone
I need/want to share
this with!  Thank you!

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