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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 2004-11-07 07:38 PM


God Bless This House

God bless this house, these rooms, these walls
The kitchen stove, the porch, the halls
A child’s squeal, a little sigh
The doorbell’s chime, a wave goodbye

God bless this table we surround
With loving words and laughter’s sound
The evenings when we congregate
Around the fire , beside the gate

God bless the books, the games we play
The stories told at end of day
Adventurous trails on which we’re led
The comforter that warms our bed

God bless the seedling that has grown
A giant oak that shades our home
A tree that buds when spring begins
And sings a hymn in winter winds

God bless the hearth with dancing flames
The contents of our picture frames
The letters we have tucked away
The words that we have left to say

God bless the hearts that weep inside
Our love, our honor and our pride
The way we celebrate our days
With little things in special ways

God bless the cherished friends we make
Each Christmas tree, each birthday cake
God bless the path our children choose
When they’ve departed from our shoes

No matter where their footsteps roam
God grant they find their way back home
For home is always in the heart
Where love is  born and memories start

God bless this house, these walls of stone
My thoughts and dreams when I’m alone
The summer heat, the winter freeze
The joy derived from memories

God grant my children never cease
To find within, their greatest peace
God bless their home, their porch, their roof
The love, the joy, the faith, the truth

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (11-07-2004 08:17 PM).]

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myheart
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1 posted 2004-11-07 07:44 PM


amen.
very lovely.
~myheart~

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2 posted 2004-11-07 07:49 PM


And God please bless our dear Elizabeth.
Amen.

Sunshine
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3 posted 2004-11-07 07:54 PM



You have within you a magnolia steel
of forgiveness, of love, of truth,
and willingness to persevere.

You, as always, will be my Lady Santos.

hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 2004-11-07 09:49 PM


God bless your words
They ring so true
They echo out
The heart of you

Liz...I miss you and your beautiful words. I pray God has been good to you as of late and holds you safely tucked beneath His wing. God bless you dear poet...this is simply beautiful

Martie
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5 posted 2004-11-07 09:59 PM


Liz

Your poem gave me chills....it is so beautiful!  I miss your house.  

Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 2004-11-07 10:58 PM


You warm my heart,dear friends. Miss you too, Hoot. Would love to see you here in POttstown.
THank you all
Liz

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7 posted 2004-11-07 11:30 PM


A joy to read...James
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8 posted 2004-11-08 05:25 AM


delightful read this morning
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9 posted 2004-11-08 06:59 AM


you and your children shall never cease, for it is through the life which you so generously gave that they to, shall give and go on....

Every line of this was precious, and truly what it's all about...

I'm going to add one more line if you don't mind....

and God Bless Liz and many thanks to thee above for the tenderness she's given us...

God Bless you my Friend...you are a treasure

Luv and hugs
Me


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10 posted 2004-11-08 08:58 AM


OhSweetLizzyLady~
This is a *gift* ... and I thank you for it~
It is printed ... framed ... and also will be given to those I love dearly as this season lends itself to the blessings we have before us~

THANK YOU for 'almost' five years of your poetic beauty and friendship~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
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11 posted 2004-11-08 01:44 PM


God blessed that house and all who pass through its door long ago m'friend.  As I have said all too many times before, no where on this earth is it evident that a house is love, than in yours.  I even felt it when I was there, stronger than I ever have in my life.  But...just in case he is really busy these days with all the strife in this world, I will join you in grace, in wishing you continued blessings.
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 2004-11-08 02:10 PM


How can I reply to these warm and loving remarks other than with arms around you all in a big hug. My door is always open to you all, I think you already know that, but it merits repeating.
Thank you and God bless
You flutter my heart
Liz

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13 posted 2004-11-09 08:30 AM


What love must fill that house... to pour out the door and into our hearts so generously. *S* This is absolutely beautiful!
JL
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14 posted 2004-11-09 09:46 AM


Amen!

JL

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15 posted 2004-11-09 09:52 AM


oh yes...AMEN Liz...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

BloomingRose
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16 posted 2004-11-12 01:53 PM


Amen! God bless you!

Deb

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17 posted 2004-12-27 11:22 PM


What a lovely prayer....this should be hanging up in every home! Hmm, there's an idea. May I?

~sky

Have a Holly Jolly Christmas! Jesus is the reason for the season!!

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18 posted 2004-12-28 11:00 PM


Elizabeth, this is absolutely beautiful. As all of your poems. They are always such a delight to read. I wish you very happy holidays.
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19 posted 2004-12-29 03:22 AM


what a lovely prayer! i truly enjoyed reading this...several times
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20 posted 2004-12-29 03:53 AM


When I was a kid, there was a magazine of poetry and prose called Ideals.  I don't know if it still exists, but it had wonderful poetry and illustrations in it.  I can easily visualize this printed in it.  You write so beautifully.

        miscellanea

          

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21 posted 2004-12-29 01:27 PM





Nan
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22 posted 2004-12-29 04:49 PM


And God Bless YOU, dear Liz...
*Alli4000*
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23 posted 2004-12-29 06:35 PM


Wonderful write!

~Alli~

Happy Holidays!

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24 posted 2005-01-02 01:15 PM


Amen, Elizabeth!
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