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Dark Angel
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0 posted 2004-11-07 05:43 PM


I will wait

with the company of madness

the changing of sea

and there’s no telling

until nothing is left

but bones

scattered

six deep

yes because, there’s no way

in hell i’m going to the fire

before i’m due

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

© Copyright 2004 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
babygirlwlove
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1 posted 2004-11-07 06:11 PM


amen to that !

love&light,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Martie
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2 posted 2004-11-07 06:23 PM


Maree

I have a feeling, with the verve you have....that you could blow the fire out!  

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2004-11-07 06:33 PM



BRAVA!!!!

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2004-11-07 06:52 PM



muted
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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
5 posted 2004-11-07 08:57 PM


you are awesome...

and we all know it

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-11-07 09:05 PM


Excellent!!!  Brava!!

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
7 posted 2004-11-07 10:17 PM


you tell 'em bella
littlewing
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New York
8 posted 2004-11-08 07:10 PM


ha-ha they are in trouble if you are coming early . . . I loved this!
Susan
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walking the surreal
9 posted 2004-11-08 07:12 PM


Ah yes, a defiant cry - well said -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

wranx
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10 posted 2004-11-08 10:15 PM


Yep! Biting and scratching all the way!

You rock too, Darksis.

Dark Angel
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11 posted 2004-11-09 06:45 AM


allo all, thanks so much for your lervely replies, you know I appreciate them all and so very much.

This was just a tad of my quirkiness comin out



Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

suthern
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12 posted 2004-11-09 09:01 AM


LOL... Amen to that! *S*
Cpat Hair
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13 posted 2004-11-09 09:12 AM


(chuckling)
Gentle Spirit
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14 posted 2004-11-09 09:47 AM


have been waiting to see your words again Maree...
was most definately worth the wait!
AWESOME job here gal!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Corinne
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state of confusion
15 posted 2004-11-10 09:22 PM


I like the fire of this, Maree. Rage, rage against the dying of the light, yes?

Corinne

p.s. A personal thank you for always being so supportive!

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