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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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indulgeo words lie heavy on my shoulders alone upon rickety cloth and rave the tragic wants that break my skin there is no end to this dream which trembles beneath my nails splitting them i touch it sad and think how beautiful it would be in its climax into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When those nails split and the quick is touched the pain goes deeper than one would ever want. Excellent read, my dear. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Maree Words have felt a little heavy on my shoulders of late, too....although of a different kind. You are not alone though, my friend, and your poetry speaks the words for you.  |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
excellent writing. ~myheart~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
you are hurting me today  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing writing!! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
hugs. |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
This one dug into my chest and settled there, Maree. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Damn.... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Thank you all so very much for your kind and ever generous replies. I appreciate them so. Mxx into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am thinking not half as beautiful as the soul with the dream. Create it, live it, breath it. Wonderful reading you always. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
:  :it is the journey to the end... not the end, which we are here to enjoy.... |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you are a journey and tremendous read!!! |
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