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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2004-11-07 01:56 PM


some highways
are new to you now
as you hang on hard

when we lean into them
and the road whispers
that your virgin skin

will be new ink doomed
when you wake your woman
on some tomorrow

and say my saliva
tastes the same
as yours does then

and you know my eyes
for they are yours
without the fear

that you used to wear


Dark (satin and glass)

© Copyright 2004 ©Dark 2k - All Rights Reserved
myheart
Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160
lost in your eyes
1 posted 2004-11-07 02:28 PM


very interesting. makes me see a couple of different scenes in my mind. enjoyed.
~myheart~

Dark Angel
Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

2 posted 2004-11-07 02:40 PM


I just love your images Mr D

Mxx

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2004-11-07 03:20 PM


DS

Highway one in a car is beautiful, on a bike it would be twice as nice!  

babygirlwlove
Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
4 posted 2004-11-07 04:18 PM


on a r o l l, daddy...lol

love you,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2004-11-07 04:52 PM


If a person should
have opportunity
to start anew,
no better than, by
beginning
at / on one.

Such a trip, this!

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-11-07 06:01 PM


D-

I like to look at the world through your eyes, it is a new perspective - and to see highway one on a bike - that would be soooo cool -

Enjoyed this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
7 posted 2004-11-07 07:03 PM


neat
Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

8 posted 2004-11-08 01:06 AM


oh - this gets me...

K

Krawdad
Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597

9 posted 2004-11-08 03:03 AM


Once in a rare while
it is without
and perhaps along
a highway somewhere


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