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stevebrklynnyc
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0 posted 2004-11-06 07:54 PM


A fleeting chance
No one will listen

The night is dark
Secrets come full circle

Thoughts are vague as we try to guess
Hope is dying
We lay to rest

Stars run bright in a dying premise
The light is gone
We hurt to remember

Souls breath as one
We can only pray

Love is lost
This dying day

Echoes of thought
Pain is in out heart
We once loved
Forever is at fault

© Copyright 2004 Stephen Capp - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2004-11-06 07:58 PM


"Forever is at fault"
oh, so much within that one line

enjoyed the read!

stevebrklynnyc
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2 posted 2004-11-06 08:00 PM


Thank you, it just comes from the heart.
myheart
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3 posted 2004-11-06 08:08 PM


enjoyed this very much
jwesley
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4 posted 2004-11-06 08:43 PM


enjoyed the read me friend...

jwesley

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5 posted 2004-11-06 08:59 PM


Steve~

'The night is dark
Secrets come full circle'


I sure like that thought~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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6 posted 2004-11-06 09:02 PM


I understand too well
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