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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2004-11-06 07:45 PM


I believe it was me
who avowed in my sleep
to keep the vision of you,
your eyes, your smile,
your calmness beside
my emotional side.

I believe it was me
who agreed in my sleep
to not ever say goodbye
from now till the moment I die
but I believe it was me
who believed and believes
never can anyone die.

I believe it was me,
only me in your dreams,
wishing to one day be real
so you can believe  
that all I believe
is because
I believe in you!  


© Copyright 2004 Helen - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-11-06 07:49 PM


OMG, this is such a beauty, Helen.
Such straightforward touching.

Honeybunch
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2 posted 2004-11-06 07:52 PM


Thanks, midnitesun.  I'm all for straightforward touching but sometimes the distance is too far for my arms so I use my mind.
myheart
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lost in your eyes
3 posted 2004-11-06 08:13 PM


nice. I especially like the last stanza.
jwesley
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4 posted 2004-11-06 08:40 PM


Ah, now this was especially nice to read...

jwesley

passing shadows
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5 posted 2004-11-06 09:06 PM


beautiful write
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2004-11-07 04:02 PM


This is a wonderful write Helen..
and I am almost sure in South Africa now it is your birthday!
So....may I add HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

scorpio
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right...there
7 posted 2004-11-07 04:50 PM


Beautifully written!!

believe in what your heart feels...

Honeybunch
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8 posted 2004-11-07 11:28 PM


Thank you all so much for your gracious replies.  Yes, Nancy, you are so right.  Another birthday.  Thank you for your wishes.  May the next 12 months be good for all of us!
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