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Huan Yi
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Hi.

My name?
Itís...
of no consequence.

Hereís
a picture
of my girl.

You,
or something like you,
met her
one night
when she was thirteen....

You donít
remember....

I do...

Be afraid
© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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intriguingly disturbing storyline. compels the reader to ponder
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2 posted 11-06-2004 08:48 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

John~
Interestingly mysterious~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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very cool write

that last line said it all
Drauntz
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4 posted 05-15-2007 12:44 AM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

read and confused. There are at least 10 stories in those words just by cut in different ways.

what a poet!!!!! trapped in midnight..it is me.
 
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