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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2004-11-06 04:40 PM




I have a good friend
who thinks
you’re stupid

that any woman
who believes
in the things you do
is void of reason
or just not there

Sometimes
I can feel him
roll his eyes
He notes you’re rather wide

He wonders
why I waste my time—
We argue
every day



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-11-06 05:18 PM


good for you

Magnus
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2 posted 2004-11-06 05:20 PM


Freedom of choice...a desire of love and
equality...driving forces for that which
we want...as we let the door close behind
us...and say "Ciao"...

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3 posted 2005-02-20 05:55 PM


Yes -- seems we do have some parallels....and you write this painful one so well...

Another unwanted parallel for us may be that this poem got TWO (?????) replies -- PiP utterly mystifies me sometimes!

Well, I'll start the process of making amends right here, right now..... some of your poetry is going to be a book some day if it isn't already....and I want to be able to say I read it first.

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TexUS
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4 posted 2005-02-22 10:01 PM


Don't think I'd stay friendly with a guy like Harvey!
Excellent write.  

latearrival
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5 posted 2005-02-25 06:28 PM


It pays to argue with that friend but remember you are the CEO and you have to win over that voice with positive input. marty
Drauntz
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6 posted 2007-04-23 06:14 PM


oh, what can I say?
"I"... tattletale.
"You"....why so quiet?
"he"...rude.

read.

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