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Huan Yi
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0 posted 11-06-2004 04:40 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi



I have a good friend
who thinks
you’re stupid

that any woman
who believes
in the things you do
is void of reason
or just not there

Sometimes
I can feel him
roll his eyes
He notes you’re rather wide

He wonders
why I waste my time—
We argue
every day


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1 posted 11-06-2004 05:18 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

good for you
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2 posted 11-06-2004 05:20 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

Freedom of choice...a desire of love and
equality...driving forces for that which
we want...as we let the door close behind
us...and say "Ciao"...
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3 posted 02-20-2005 05:55 PM       View Profile for Ratleader   Email Ratleader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ratleader's Home Page   View IP for Ratleader

Yes -- seems we do have some parallels....and you write this painful one so well...

Another unwanted parallel for us may be that this poem got TWO (?????) replies -- PiP utterly mystifies me sometimes!

Well, I'll start the process of making amends right here, right now..... some of your poetry is going to be a book some day if it isn't already....and I want to be able to say I read it first.

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TexUS
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4 posted 02-22-2005 10:01 PM       View Profile for TexUS   Email TexUS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TexUS

Don't think I'd stay friendly with a guy like Harvey!
Excellent write.  
latearrival
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5 posted 02-25-2005 06:28 PM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

It pays to argue with that friend but remember you are the CEO and you have to win over that voice with positive input. marty
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6 posted 04-23-2007 06:14 PM       View Profile for Drauntz   Email Drauntz   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Drauntz

oh, what can I say?
"I"... tattletale.
"You"....why so quiet?
"he"...rude.

read.
 
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