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~K~
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0 posted 2004-11-06 01:36 PM



Fluidic motion,
broken,
gang green
spreads.
Phantoms
play.
Pictures
of what
should
have been
paint
themselves
upon reality.

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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
1 posted 2004-11-06 02:11 PM


the past does haunt, excellent
Dark Angel
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2 posted 2004-11-06 06:59 PM


Pictures
of what
should
have been
paint
themselves
upon reality.


Ahuh, that they do.  

into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread.
~Sarah McLachlan~

Magnus
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3 posted 2004-11-06 07:23 PM


Well said, seems it is that way too often
for many of us.

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2004-11-06 07:34 PM


You describe the haunting exceptionally well, Lady.

Enjoyed this a great deal.

jwesley
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5 posted 2004-11-06 08:51 PM


I've stood in that same cemetary, before that same tombstone . . . and saw the dance....


jwesley

stevebrklynnyc
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6 posted 2004-11-06 08:54 PM


Im catholic and that made me want to go to confession.
passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2004-11-06 08:59 PM


spooky stuff

enjoyed

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Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving
8 posted 2004-11-07 08:09 AM


...there is a cure for these types of infections....
its by never leaving things unresolved...ghosts are only looking  for closure

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9 posted 2004-11-07 12:53 PM


Dark poem... ..very spooky.

~Alli~

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