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cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

0 posted 2004-11-06 05:10 AM

I came back to Erin
The land that I love.
there was Seanine waiting,
this before he died of the drink.

No flowers, too manly for that
but a wide grin from ear to ear
his arms open wide..
And a question.

Of course I would,
twas the reason for my return.

I did make it down the aisle,
following his coffin.
He never could keep a promise.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2004-11-06 06:56 AM

Such a sad write in the ending of it.

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2004-11-06 07:33 AM

Ah Maggie, bittersweet!

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

3 posted 2004-11-06 07:56 AM

Kethry thank you for reading. Maggie

cusick
Senior Member

since 2003-07-27

Posts 668

4 posted 2004-11-06 07:57 AM

Thank you for commenting Sunshine. Maggie

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2004-11-06 02:56 PM

MaggieDear~
This is draped in tearful shedding~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

Email noles1@totcon.com

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

6 posted 2004-11-06 05:09 PM

I am sorry for your loss.

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

7 posted 2004-11-06 05:17 PM

A sad but true story, so often repeated,
leaving empty arms that yearn to hold and
can not.

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