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London Bridge |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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After the sun sets Smothered in jungle On low hills Down the line Pop up flares A stream of tracers Over razor wire My friend for now We’re all we have We’re alone together Until the dawn We’ll be as one One hope One heart One life to lose |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
Oh, I see here the images so vividly - so much displayed in so few words - well done  SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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J.Samm Member
since 2004-01-12
Posts 415Iloilo City, Philippines |
there is a beautiful, serene quality in this poem...portrays quite a blissful moment |
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