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If I could weave a web
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If I could weave a web |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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 If I could weave a web of fibers fine To hold the treasures that I knew were mine I would have kept them all not just a few But I am sure I've kept the one from you If I could weave a web of fibers strong To hold my memories a lifetime long I would have kept them all not just a few But I am sure I've kept the one of you If I could weave a web of fibers red To hold the loves wich in my life I had I would have kept them all not just a few But I am sure I've kept my love for you Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Wonderful words...and I love the picture! M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Titia... So good to read you again!! Hugs~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lovely Titia  Maree. into this night i wonder, it's morning that i dread, another day of knowing of, the path i fear to tread. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TitiaLove~ Not only is your photo FANTASMATICAL ... your words are woven beauties~  You've definitely spun a lovely here ... and I hold you in the web of this heart that would just love to see you return to this meadow~  *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
wow. this is really outstanding! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Titia the picture framed in your words is absolutely first class. However I have to tell you, this girl is afraid of nothing BUT a ittsy bitsy spider! See I even keep this on my favorites so I know "Spiders Most Wanted" LOL. Take a look at the love bites some of those beauties leave it will sure make you wonder about taking their picture too close  http://www.rochedalss.eq.edu.au/reclusebite.htm However, this was outstanding work as you got me to look at something I detest and think it was beautiful.  Just a second here I am onto something - maybe you come to the US and run for President? LOL Example is not the main thing in influencing others, it is the only thing. ~ Albert Schweitzer |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hey Mysteria, this is Holland, we don't have dangerous spiders at all, not even very big ones, at least not in free nature that is. None of our native spiders will bite you. Thanks to all for the replies. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Hi, dutchie....this is an excellent poem accented with a beautiful picture. Your sincerity shines in the wording.. If you would build a web To capture me, my dear You wouldn't have to waste time fooling me I'd VOLUNTEER!!!!!  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
When you weave a web of memories it holds me tight. I loved the line I'm sure I would remember... it holds so much promise. Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Balladeer: I thought I had caught you in my web already because I treasure you as a Poet, I've great memories on Tampa time and I love your humor.Keth, the same as above, those Tampa time memories will never fade. Titia Like scattered leaves...my words will flow |
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