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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2004-11-05 06:27 PM



A piano is softly playing in the wind.
Someone else’s fingers know the keys.
Certainly not mine!
The tangling of fingers boggles my mind
so I just watch from the sidelines.
If only I could make that kind of music
I’d do it, and joyfully so!
I can sing, but have no awards.
The only kind of music I can make is
love
Try playing that on the piano!


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Margherita
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1 posted 2004-11-05 06:58 PM


This is very lovely!
The kind of music you can make is the most beautiful one! LOVE ... whether it is played on the piano or within your heart.
Love, Margherita

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2 posted 2004-11-05 07:50 PM


I can play sadness well, but love, no
jwesley
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3 posted 2004-11-05 08:05 PM


really ejoyed the way you did this, my friend...and I can see you stamp your foot in defiance of the piano player...loved it.

jwesley

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4 posted 2004-11-05 08:28 PM


"The only kind of music I can make is
love
Try playing that on the piano!"

Lovely...very lovely.
Hugs~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

mytuesdaywishes
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a voice from the musicbox
5 posted 2004-11-06 01:18 PM


love the funky twist at the end...

in the end it's not just you with your memories and your scars, fall on me if you ever forget how beautiful you are.

Enchantress
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6 posted 2004-11-06 02:05 PM


Just popped back in to say...
HAPPY BIRTHDAY PRETTY LADY!!
Have a good one!

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7 posted 2004-11-06 02:15 PM


SweetBloomingRose~
How very, very precious is this !!!

Happy Birthday lovely friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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BloomingRose
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8 posted 2004-11-06 03:38 PM


Thanks so much to everyone that replied!
And a special thanks for the Birthday wishes.

Love to all,
Deb

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9 posted 2004-11-07 12:29 PM


Love this poem, great write!
Also...Happy B-Day! I hope your day has been going great!


~Alli~

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10 posted 2004-11-07 10:14 AM



LOL...ok, so you got me!
It's so good to see you again,
Deb!  Welcome home!

Mark Bohannan
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11 posted 2004-11-07 04:45 PM


No better music than that of the heart spirituality and that you have, not to mention a voice in song that stands alone.  Now that is some kind of music, be proud of it.  Enjoyed this from you.
BloomingRose
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12 posted 2004-11-07 08:45 PM


Love the music and the replies.
Thanks to all!

Deb

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