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Krawdad
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0 posted 2004-11-05 05:35 PM



                     day 241


                     5:15, your time
                     depression, my time

                     leaving here soon
                     stop at a project
                     to do some little bit
                     of pointless work

                     buy some food
                     drive the pointless road
                     south

                     and wonder
                     if Chicago will be there
                     in the morning





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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 2004-11-05 07:07 PM


A moment in time, winsomely told. I think Chicago will be there....
Titia Geertman
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Netherlands
2 posted 2004-11-05 07:27 PM



Day 241

02.15 my time
reading time

did a little bit
of everything
during the day
beautiful sunset

had dinner
watched the telly
don't know if Chigago
will be there tomorrow

but you're here
that's important
you just fed
my soul
Thanks

Titia


Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2004-11-05 07:45 PM


I enjoy this series
jwesley
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2004-11-05 08:13 PM


me too!!!

jwesley

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2004-11-05 08:24 PM


I'm sure it will be....well said Kraw!

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

Susan
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since 2004-03-27
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walking the surreal
6 posted 2004-11-05 10:31 PM


Depends on the wind

Enjoyed this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
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the ass-end of space
7 posted 2004-11-06 02:24 PM


5:15, your time
depression, my time


Yanno, I have that same watch Ed

R

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