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Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29
Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

0 posted 2004-11-05 05:20 PM


Each day comes and goes,
Day to day you just want to go by,
Head swimming with confusion,
You want cry and scream,
No one really understands,
Nor do they know what you mean.

I ask myself why,
Why the pain,
Why the uncertainty,
Why is it that I feel like no ones listening,
Listen to me please.

Let me go,
Set me free,
Be who I want to be.
Give me happiness,
A reason to smile,
Send me love,
Love from above.

The future for me I can’t predict,
I only hope it’s good,
Wish I knew what was in store,
Maybe then I’ll be really happy,
Enough to want even more.

Now as I am here at this point in time,
I ponder about what could be next,
Good or bad,
Being happy or sad,
Life is a journey,
Therefore I can only hope for the very best.

Let me go,
Set me free,
Be who I want to be.
Give me happiness,
A reason to smile,
Send me love,
Love from above.

Let me go,
Set me free,
Be who I want to be.
Give me happiness,
A reason to smile,
Send me love,
Love from above.

Life is a gift so live it to the fullest!

© Copyright 2004 Kelly Gambon - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2004-11-05 07:54 PM


Love from Above, yes. This is already a wish fulfilled, you have it in your heart.

The longing is very well expressed here.

A smile from me.
Love, Margherita

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2004-11-05 08:01 PM


ah, agree with margarehita whole heartedly...

well expressed.

j.

Ericc
Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

3 posted 2004-11-09 02:30 PM


Powerfuly expressed.

Love,
Eric

Susan
Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104
walking the surreal
4 posted 2004-11-09 02:42 PM


Ah, free to be me - yes, I know this cry of the heart -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you.  Joy is a state of mind.

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