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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2004-11-05 01:48 PM



The Sounds Of The Sea
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She’s the only one who writes
and he knows each line by heart.
Remembering the sounds of the sea
he fashions a boat made from paper.
In this way he can return to her
again and again.
She’s more than a face in a photograph.


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passing shadows
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1 posted 2004-11-05 03:58 PM


I like it
jwesley
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2 posted 2004-11-06 10:11 PM


I think this is great and don't understand how it didn't get more reads...glad I found it and was able to send it around for another shot.

jwesley

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3 posted 2004-11-06 10:20 PM


BloomingRose~
And on this beautiful poetic note I retire for the night~
I am soooooooo happy this one came around, as I missed it the first time~

YOU are beautiful poetic thoughts, dear friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram <))><

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inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2004-11-21 09:26 AM


yes she is  -more
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