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HopeS
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0 posted 2004-11-05 11:15 AM



Back And Forth I Always Go

Having written less recently
Not knowing where to start
Back and forth I always go
Between my mind and heart

Its heart and mind debating
Both have capacity to write
Back and forth I always go
Between darkness and light

The heart can be blindly led
Yet my mind can clearly see
Back and forth I always go
Between reality and fantasy

Placing feelings in context
As I internalise emotionally
Back and forth I always go
Between ins and outs of me

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1 posted 2004-11-05 11:22 AM


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2 posted 2004-11-05 07:18 PM


"Having written less recently
Not knowing where to start
Back and forth I always go
Between my mind and heart"


Liked that part.  And ditto to what dixie said....i know where you're coming from. I have the same problem, never knowing where to start.

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eor
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3 posted 2004-11-05 07:20 PM


ah, life...but one way always makes itself clear...eventually

Awake through motion with curiosity to curtain your first move
Over arms length they'll break protocol
Jealous envy for the youngest one

Margherita
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4 posted 2004-11-05 07:31 PM


Dear Hope, the attachment to the past still gives you pain and you express it really in such a beautiful way.

The heart can be blindly led
Yet my mind can clearly see
Back and forth I always go
Between reality and fantasy



You may enjoy Kayjay's "When love has gone".

Hugs and love.
Margherita

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