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scorpio
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0 posted 2004-11-05 08:39 AM



Your Eyes

In the quiet dark
When moon reflects in your eyes
I seek your essence..

believe in what your heart feels...

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Cpat Hair
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1 posted 2004-11-05 08:45 AM


ah my friend... you hint of things both physical and mystical here..

what indeed is in the essence... and in the eyes unclouded...

nice work sir.. you certainly made me think with this one..and feel.. something I may have to write myself..

thank you


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2 posted 2004-11-05 08:51 AM


Can't say it much better than Cpat did...
quite the vision you are looking at,
and into, Scorpio.  You are extremely fortunate!

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3 posted 2004-11-05 08:54 AM


scorpio
Well done my friend.

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4 posted 2004-11-05 09:47 AM


Hello dear scorpio!  So good to see you posting again!
This has such a dreamlike quality to it..
rather mysterious, is she?
They say the eyes are the window to the soul,
do you believe that to be true?
Wonderful post...made for daydreaming.
~Smiles & Hugs & Love ya, Tinker~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

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5 posted 2004-11-05 11:19 AM


~ and your beautiful essence shines through this touching write.

Love & Light,
EA

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6 posted 2004-11-05 11:22 AM


scorpio

This poem made me think of one of my favorite songs called "Your Eyes".  

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7 posted 2004-11-05 11:25 AM


beautiful!
scorpio
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8 posted 2004-11-05 12:18 PM


Thank you Ron.  I await your next poem.

I'm fortunate Karilea. Thank you for your support.

Sy, I appreciate and thank you for the "welldone".

Tinker, she is beautiful. The mystery is in why she loves me.  Thank you for your wonderful reply.

Thank you Linda.  Your support is most appreciated.

I remember that song Martie. Thank you for stopping in to read.

Thanks Dixie.  

believe in what your heart feels...

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9 posted 2004-11-05 07:34 PM


short, sweet, and beautiful.

~Alli~

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scorpio
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10 posted 2004-11-05 08:21 PM


Thank you Alli.  Your comments are appreciated.

believe in what your heart feels...

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11 posted 2004-11-06 05:15 PM


The title by itself draws one in,  for in
eyes lies the gateway to a soul.  And it
seems you have found that treasured place.

I wonder why she does as well....from time
to time...

Well done!

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12 posted 2004-11-06 05:17 PM


Very, very well done m'friend!
scorpio
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13 posted 2004-11-07 09:23 AM


Thank you Barry and Midnitesun.  I appreciate your comments.

believe in what your heart feels...

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14 posted 2004-11-08 11:28 PM


Lovely....James
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