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Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

0 posted 2004-11-09 02:09 PM

As if ten years from
water...

I thirst for your touch.

And while moments fall in
parched anticipation.

Your fingers gather as clouds to
my horizon.

With the promise of
rain...

As I lay myself
before
you.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

1 posted 2004-11-09 02:13 PM

beautiful yet sad, makes me

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-11-09 02:17 PM

oh Eric...how very beautiful!

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

3 posted 2004-11-09 02:57 PM

WOW!!!! Oh my...I am speechless...
BEAUTIFUL Eric!!

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

4 posted 2004-11-09 03:37 PM

I've gotta start visiting more often...this is simple in its beauty...
reminds me of a calming waterfall!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2004-11-09 03:40 PM

Beautiful.

EA

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2004-11-09 04:05 PM

As if ten years from
water...

I thirst for your touch.

Oh, yes... I know this... how welcome such clouds, their promise... and the fulfillment they give. *S* Beautiful work!!

myheart
Member

since 2004-11-05

Posts 160
lost in your eyes

7 posted 2004-11-09 04:24 PM

Ericc, this an extremely well written piece.

~myheart~

Love is the poetry of the senses. ~Honoré de Balzac

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

8 posted 2004-11-09 07:30 PM

The yearn of this is magnificent.
TD

Susan
Member Ascendant

since 2004-03-27

Posts 5104
walking the surreal

9 posted 2004-11-09 07:34 PM

Eric, Eric, Eric, your reign as king of minimalism at its best continues - absolutely love this -

Susan

Happiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

10 posted 2004-11-09 09:52 PM

I always love your poems

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

11 posted 2004-11-09 09:55 PM

Ericc
A touch of grace, enjoyed.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

12 posted 2004-11-10 11:24 AM

G o r g e o u s!

Loving you,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2004-11-10 06:29 PM

Enjoyed...James

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

14 posted 2004-11-10 10:41 PM

Eric

Your words are as smooth as silk and so beautifully written, as always.

Take care.......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

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