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But I will write on
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But I will write on |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Eyes flashed lightning withing your worth blazing your soul Blazing gut wrenching we used nothing We blazed as a beacon But we let our own needs Deliver Hope danced on those easy days We took ourselves Into And then we danced lives Of lives We had lived We danced on this vision of rhythm We Throughout a vision Of seconds We have Run our life Now Seamless fabric dark Herded as cattle to a wall To spare Space Candles on a thin dress Of ideas To understand |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
yes, as all should....... write on. well done. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
staying close reforms tears to nothingness but a smile in understanding...but for love is there anything else indeed a design among precious woven fabric |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
I look at this and I think "did I just reach into the gut and write it" All of my stuff comes from me because I use a technique from a lot of years ago to let meditation use what it can deliver but allowing your system to settle down and flow and the fear of meditation is that you lose control and you dont, believe me, but your poetry can be a bit different, and you think you should edit it, and then say "what the hell". Dave |
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