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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-11-04 10:46 AM


Husky dripping wonder
Rings the phone
Follows me
Curled lipped
Like a puppy dog

Without panic where
Fantasies stretch
Where spring dances rainbows
It’s easy to listen…you know
Lovey-dovey knowledge
Freckles & Irish eyes
Stores liquid green
      White banks salivates delta soil
         Growing voices with arms

Whisperin a shutdown
Like a bayonet of dawn
Where sons are instinctive
Bobbing on a lake of memory
        Like the crimson bridge of dream

Finding a path that was hide n' seek
Or was it me hiding in a forest of ghosts
Hazardous Materials
Rocking and altering shape
Motioning me back
From a limp dripping deep
       Spoken out loud & trueth to word
Spine of continuous lapping intentionality

When standing still
      Muse and sigh
           Muse and sigh
Motion this
          Breathing here
Eye to eye
         Touching rose
Feeling the mind
          Inside

A lingering hand
    Place with a ceiling fan
Acreage turning
Lends the place of worship
Watching the transom for cryptograms

        Leaving it open all night
          sigh....all night

Myriad faces smolder in part
Of co-existence

     Sultry air aboutness

        Intimacy ambiguous
          on the tarmac of conversing minds

Do not weep to keep me
Master the jewel and pearl bud
          Cloves surreal
Outreaching envious years
Follow the lead of the swallow
Well guided in likeness

         Wings of mental likeness
           exclusive phenomena

        To a place of same

In a world of it’s own

I offer you persuading slippers
Mystery creation's broad spectrum
       All the evenings we missed
          Woven around the air of quiet equinox

          Alpha images organic
            Lighting the stove
Where nature shares sleep positions
   and Passage to song
Hush now, grazing softly
my fingers across your
   hungry lips
Find your wanting...


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Cpat Hair
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since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2004-11-04 10:53 AM


very nice...

very nice indeed... this has passion..and heart....

enjoyed this ma'am..

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

2 posted 2004-11-04 11:04 AM


this SPOKE to me Lee...
very well done...

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
3 posted 2004-11-04 12:57 PM


LeeJ

"When standing still
      Muse and sigh
           Muse and sigh
Motion this sigh
          Breathing here
Eye to eye
         Touching the rose
Feeling the mind
          Inside"
--------
You are so lovely!  

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2004-11-04 03:59 PM


a dozen roses and a round of applause
so well done once again
this gave me a rush and made me gush on a sleepy rainy nj day

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
5 posted 2004-11-04 04:10 PM


lovely, I felt as though I was waltzing about the scenery with someone of perfect fit


truly lovely sensation within the rhythm and language as well as gentle spinning of the layout

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2004-11-05 04:05 PM


"I offer you persuading slippers
Mystery creation's broad spectrum
All the evenings we missed
Woven around the air of quiet equinox

Alpha images organic
Lighting the stove
Where nature shares sleep positions
and Passage to song
Hush now, grazing softly
my fingers across your
hungry lips
Find your wanting..."


Wow!!
Very nice Lee J.

JL



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