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The Power of Dew
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The Power of Dew |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Power of Dew A dew drop woke me from my sleep It was a drop of mornings weep It washed the mist from out my eyes To look upon a rainbow sky The awe of color struck me dumb And there I lay in still succumb Benumb the twisted edge of wile That brought my face a wistful smile A moment’s capture in its grace Wove a shroud of mantle lace The odor of a new moan glade A glade, a braid, a spirit maid I cannot say her name for sure She was the phantom of my lure But love shined on her pretty face And I was caught within its grace A pleasures treasure and a sigh It was a rainbow caught my eye |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
lyrical and endearing tribute to your muse... much enjoyed, **BabygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Send that rainbow on to all... for it surely will enthrall the most staid of any, and, it's true... I see the beauty in your view...   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
babygirlwlove Your joy is my joy. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine Beauty knows beauty.  |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"The odor of a new moan glade A glade, a braid, a spirit maid" "A pleasures treasure and a sigh It was a rainbow caught my eye" From internal rhymes to metrical perfection ... this simply sings, Sy. Beautiful!  Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Kit You hve no idea the pleasure your replies give me.  |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
See More "A moment’s capture in its grace Wove a shroud of mantle lace The odor of a new moan glade A glade, a braid, a spirit maid" Spirit maids are always beautiful.. Well done, poet sir..enjoyed ---------ice/ford ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
ice That was nice. And I thank you for the read. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Mornin'! Wonderful Sy. "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
well sir, you surely send out such beautiful waves of joy to the world... simply mezmorising! Thank you  morning sweet manGive Randy a big hug today |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, You are a love. LeeJ Thank you. |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Sy I'm glad you chase the rainbow. This write is a golden one. believe in what your heart feels... |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Sy, It's soooo great to read your poetry again. My internet has been down for a while, preventing my reading. Gee, I didn't how much I missed you and everyone here! You still have that wonderful metrical song as someone already pointed out. Your words always sing a slow song to me, causing me to pause. Have a great day! miscellanea |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
beautiful, Sy, thanks for the view... K |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Now reading this beauty is a perfect way to start the day!! Beautiful beautiful this is Sy! ~Morning hugs, Nancy~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
days with rainbows... Left work a while back.. and as I left, the clouds to the west parted enough that there was a beautiful double rainbow in the east... and a gentle rain falling slow... thanks for helping me remember that Sy.. rainbows and soul... |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Good morning Sy .... I cannot think of a more glorious way to start my day. Thank you for your enchanting words. hugs, Marti A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
another beauty for our morning Sey. The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
scorpio You are a good friend, thank you. miscellanea Hope your computer is well again, missed you. Kahlil You welcome and thank you. Nancy, You are a delight. Cpat, Enjoyed your comment, thank you. Marti, Your comment has made my day. Gentle, You really are a dove. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T. ~ I am certain that if I had the opportunity ~ and the pleasure! ~ of looking into your eyes, I would see a rainbow in each one of them!   Hugs with love, EA  |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy You know I've been trying to get up off my down...your poem helped me do that. Thank you!  |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A pleasures treasure and a sigh It was a rainbow caught my eye ~~ And pleasure, yours, to share each day I come to read, enjoy your say~~ always love to read your flow, Sy hugs M |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Your work is always excellent... but among all those gems, some shine with a special sparkle... this is one. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel LOL that would depend on who looks at them. Hugs. Martie That's funny your reply did the same for me. Maureen, Always a pleasure to see your replies. suthern As does your comment.  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The odor of a new moan glade A glade, a braid, a spirit maid ============================== Sy, Sy, sweet cadenced Sy... what you do with a couplet of rhyme is a gift to time. I do so love the way your mind works in rhyme  *ww* Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, And I love the way your mind works in reply. Winkiewinkie |
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