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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2004-11-04 07:08 AM


Windblown eyebrows
Where living things
Stand upright, somewhere else
Still, with continued interest
Rounding some strange effects
Pouring
Dripping wet compilations
Grinning, deniably
If only for a moment
A day
Or perhaps even “a lifetime”
Searing smooth tapping on my window

Primal hunger grows the man
Wearing long concert lives
Praying on bended knees
Windblown eyebrows
Where night things kayak elements
Ocean bearing two seats
Flexes loyal
Flushed mindful sandals
Pressed against a look back
Nice weather flowing
Pressing to skin
Between convex souls
Alerts heaven whispers
Fables…early childhood entries
Hanging imaginative
Insomnia well done
Teenage petals tickle
Hundred dollar thoughts

Mesmerized jade walks between your fingers
Half curious colored bricks
Seam where the night cools
And the silence pours from your arms
There, we say nothing but drive on
Perception is the wind swept distance
Between our hearts, staring out to sea
Where you left
Unimaginable fingers paged metamorphosis
I was a verse of apparition
Now the oil on skin juices and seeds
Liking the difference

Silk of mouth to mouth
Like wings accountable
Claims a corner of my secret flannel
Yes, my love, I am a dreaming peasant
No longer entertaining ideas
Of life renting with you
Yet, still my turnstile of passion
Pours of voracious galleries

Songwriting
Calling, calling
Colors, textures
Gentle persuasion hands between my breasts
Like a road to sacred passion

Following windows dazzling reflection
Because of you
Watering eyes see what unwinding hinges
Can bring
Windblown Eyebrows
I worry not of flash challenges
And will love like that again
Someday
Someday
When the threads of love
Penetrate reasons to dream
In two who think and feel alike

You no longer have time for me
Yet
I am your doing, in fine moments
A drifter of inspiration
Taking snapshots of simple things
To you a boaring life
But, to me
No longer a mute women
I am different now
You'd be surprised
Old Blue turned up missing
Now I know a 24 hour Renaissance

Sweet intoxication, my diary
the one you used to keep on a pedastal
but threw away
oh, it's ok
You owned your reasons
And went to where the music played

My out of place cameo
Now Collecting stamps
Hello windblown eyebrows
Wearing lip gloss
Wondering at best
With no explanation
Simply forms opening reentry
To Life

Because of you
Its been real



© Copyright 2004 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
babygirlwlove
Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180
New York City
1 posted 2004-11-04 07:12 AM


wow...what a rush of color and imagery!

sweeping poem!
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2004-11-04 07:21 AM


LeeJ
I think you started a wirlwind, good morning sweet.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2004-11-04 08:02 AM


when I go for rides, I just braid em first..

wink

dug it ms Lee J

Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

4 posted 2004-11-04 08:37 AM


wow, LeeJ, listening to your heart pulse...

I selected this part as a personal favorite,
but the whole thing is wonderful, and so you.

"Because of you
Watering eyes see what unwinding hinges
Can bring
Windblown Eyebrows
I worry not of flash challenges
And will love like that again
Someday
Someday
When the threads of love
Penetrate reasons to dream"

thank you for the brain exercise...

K

Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

5 posted 2004-11-04 09:30 AM


(chuckling)... winblown eyebrows..I just had to read... my own are unruly most of the time..lol..

quite the sweeping poem ma'am...
nicely done... very nicely done

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2005-01-26 06:44 PM


Gee-Wilikers!  How did I miss this one?
What a great write Lee J.
Please put a book together???
Please, Please??
You need to get all your writings out in public.
Really!!

JL

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