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Saunni
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West Virginia

0 posted 2004-11-04 01:19 AM


Angel Of Me

Oh, a dream has been bridged to reach my reality
And, all sadness and it's hold it lies ever taken
Upon priceless, I found her on the other side of my soul
There, in thankless wonder of never forsaken...

In a single moment truth began my finest walk in life
New memories, new ground, beneath this new sky
Oh, how her heart became the angel of every emotion I own
When she led me to a rainbow made for just her and I...

Oh, it's there in lasting; she shines far brighter then the sun
The only light I've ever cared enough to see
Dear Lord, if you'll lower youreyes to the angel of heart
You'll find that she even carries me...

Now, I believe in the rain and the shades it brings
Only sweetness in a reason and a simple belief
Oh, for the angel of mind, spirit, and all that I am
She paved my kinder miles to bypass grief...

And, blessed am I to climb this height of grace
Oh, that's where I find her face to face
To which feeling do I gratefully breathe
This angel of mine... this angel of me.

Sauni

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

© Copyright 2004 Saundra - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-11-04 02:21 AM


"In a single moment truth began my finest walk in life
New memories, new ground, beneath this new sky
Oh, how her heart became the angel of every emotion I own
When she led me to a rainbow made for just her and I..."

Smiling a warm hello dear Sauni, so nice to see you again. As always, your imagery makes the mind float upon a sweet vanilla breeze.
Peaceful dreams, dear friend.

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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2 posted 2004-11-04 09:57 AM


Saunni it pleases me so to see you here again and gifting us with such a beauty...thank you and hope to see more from you again soon.  Hugs.

The greatest beauty on earth, is
found in the hearts of those
who love....

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2004-11-04 11:09 AM


beautiful words...very soothing..and I love your new picture~~


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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2004-11-04 11:17 AM


this leaves the reader with nothing but goodness penetrating heart and soul


Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
5 posted 2004-11-04 02:20 PM


Thank you all for reading this. I have been away for quite sometime. We had major flooding here in WV. The flood waters carried my home off of it's foundation with everything I owned in it. I am staying with relatives but I wanted to post a poem. Thank you all for reading.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2004-11-05 04:42 PM


Silky...one of your finest...James
Midnitesun
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7 posted 2004-11-05 04:48 PM


Oh no, that is dreadful news, Sauni, but I am so very glad that you and the family are alive and safe! I can't imagine having to replace everything, especially personal family photos and momentos!
Sauni, I have an extra copy of last year's Reflections on the Web poetry anthology, and would be happy to gift it to you. Let me know via an email, and I'll sign it and send it to you.

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2004-11-05 07:39 PM


Oh Sauni, that's terrible. I was wondering why you'd been gone. Please let me know if there's anything I can do.

I'm glad you posted this poem, a lovely piece of you.

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