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Don_Juan
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Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-11-03 11:29 PM



Ink coarses through
a slender vein
within the soul
of a quill

painting
with words
images
of solace and beauty
into a lined abyss

nice use of muffin

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ecrivan
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my own state
1 posted 2004-11-04 12:16 PM


Very fitting for a pen that has to address
issues of great pain and discomfort..where soul searching is needed..

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2 posted 2004-11-05 09:09 AM


I like this very much! *S* I tried to write my appreciation for a particular pen once... I couldn't achieve this. *S*
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3 posted 2004-11-05 10:01 AM


I wrote about a pencil once, does that count?
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Somehow mine didn't achieve the depth yours does....

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