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Sensation Of Paint
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Sensation Of Paint |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
From a silent prison colors brim Gulping air bubbles in thick cool cream Awakening quite vividly the texture of a dream As God made me in the kinship of collage Sliding in on sunshine yellow Making light in dusk’s mirage Finger paint upon my shoulder Spills a frivolous magenta tag Making happy faces on the points of peaks Drop by drop a smile broken ivory leaks Of dew drop blue And feather weather round a few Small impressions given lessons in Monet Dollop fine upon the cheeks of moons parlay Cool like spring upon the newly naked morn Sapphire, squint and whistle sway An evening gown of onyx Pinks upon the tonics of adorn Toes in paint pot dip Each another color, through the spaces slip Sticky knees to dry a shiny lullaby Of green, a supple stroke along the small of back And forth becomes its rainbow scheme Cross-legged, the sienna hills again to gleam A synonym to so proclaim In speaking of the autumn rain Copyright Kkh 11/03/04 |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh I love Monet and I love this write! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
This is far better than a steak, medium rare with all of the trimmings.... Splendiforous.... |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i splashed thru the paintings on the ground this morning on my run, kicking up a few and making my own designs along the way.. a most glorius fall collage you have created here |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
very nice... one of the best I've read of late about the season change... bravo! |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
I could almost hear that autumn rain and feel the cool breeze. Very nice write! JL |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
"Sliding in on sunshine yellow Making light in dusk’s mirage" Indeed, beautifully said....:-) "Small impressions given lessons in Monet Dollop fine upon the cheeks of moons parlay Cool like spring upon the newly naked morn Sapphire, squint and whistle sway An evening gown of onyx Pinks upon the tonics of adorn" Excellent, a poem in itself.... Love the way these lyrics roll off my tongue.. enjoyed muchly ----------ice/ford ><> Come read to me some poem, |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
lovely. enjoyed. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
an artist you are my friend... jwesley |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Awakening quite vividly the texture of a dream As God made me in the kinship of collage *********** Let's start with this line ... it reminds me that we indeed are never quite finished or complete as everything we do in life has a say in who we become. (and in a collage we can glue something over the mistakes  ).************ Cool like spring upon the newly naked morn Sapphire, squint and whistle sway An evening gown of onyx Pinks upon the tonics of adorn ************ Now that is some heavy duty "beautiful" imagery and through a one of a kind eye as well. Loved that whole verse and yes, very Monet. I could keep on going, but the real point is that I am enthralled with rhyme scemes that capture the reader softly but tight enough to hold them and you always capture that cadence well. You pull the reader in with unique visions and then you not only let them feel the poem, you allow them to be able to see and feel the brush stroke of your words. Superb!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
TD I'm not sure I have any more words to tell you how much I envy the beauty with which you write. Exquisite! |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Small impressions given lessons in Monet Dollop fine upon the cheeks of moons parlay Cool like spring upon the newly naked morn Sapphire, squint and whistle sway An evening gown of onyx Pinks upon the tonics of adorn what tremendous imagry, and each and every word falls into harmony and place within the readers heart. Such a pleasure and treasure you have written...thank you |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kathleen~ Such a word-palette you draw from ... this is of the finest imagery hue~ ALWAYS a pleasure to read you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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