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Open Poetry #34

An Agreeable Man

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-11-03 06:37 PM

An Agreeable Man

I wonder if she still
blames me for mistreating her,
disappointing her, and making
her feel like she needed
to find another man.

I don't blame her anymore
for leaving me, she was just
trying to find an agreeable man.

JamesLee
November03
2004
for Beth
This is a reflection
from something that
happened years ago.
I sincerely wish that
I could have been
that agreeable man.

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (11-04-2004 05:30 PM).]

DavePage
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since 2003-12-21

Posts 2917

1 posted 2004-11-03 06:46 PM

It says a lot and leaves a lot unsaid

Words and meaning paint a picture that could hang on a gallery

Dave

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2004-11-03 07:44 PM

Great write James!

Eric

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2004-11-03 08:24 PM

20/20

Saunni
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

4 posted 2004-11-04 01:26 AM

Very good write James! Shows your heart.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2004-11-04 02:30 AM

What's that old saying? " If I only knew then what I know now." This reminds me of that saying. enjoyed

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2004-11-04 03:31 AM

Shows a lot on your end...
I hate how we always get it later... after...

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

babygirlwlove
Senior Member

since 2004-10-10

Posts 1180
New York City

7 posted 2004-11-04 07:03 AM

honest, honest write!

love&light,
**babygirL**

**Intoxicant to the SouL**

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2004-11-04 05:34 PM

Thank you Dave, Ericc, passing shadows, Saunni, Mark, GG and babygirl for the nice responses...I feel like I sincerely try to be an agreeable man now...James

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