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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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It is not the inside nor, is it the out, leaving a feeling felt more of somewhere in between high and low where the unbalanced edges struggle to seek foothold secure enough allowing weights to rest a little easier so as not to s l i p from this side, to that but rather to find a balance somewhere in the middle. I don't like lies, I'd rather know the truth.. what say you? {Tritt/Mellencamp} [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-04-2004 02:19 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
where the unbalanced edges struggle to seek foothold secure enough allowing weights to rest a little easier so as not to s l i p from this side, to that but rather to find a balance somewhere ~*~ WOW...this came from somewhere else... and that's a good somewhere else! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
laffin at you Kari....just a mere mind ramble m'dear.....just a ramble.... thanks.  The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
firmly agree, well thought out and accomplished here...great write |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very true Donna... Well done! "cast me gently into the morning, for the night has been unkind" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
OH WOW!!! Now you just know I love this Donna!! Hugs~ Now while the leaves still dance on the wind |
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babygirlwlove Senior Member
since 2004-10-10
Posts 1180New York City |
where the unbalanced edges struggle to seek foothold secure enough allowing weights to rest a little easier ******************* oh yes! great poem! **babygirL** **Intoxicant to the SouL** |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
You got that right Donna Hope |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! yes! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 hugging and thanking each of you...The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GentlestSpirit~ Ahhhh ... the Libra in me LOVES this word-balance~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Susan Member Ascendant
since 2004-03-27
Posts 5104walking the surreal |
I love your talent - it is beautifully on display - thank you for sharing - SusanHappiness isn't something that happens to you, it's created from within you. Joy is a state of mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
'Tis so true, Dear Donna. ~ and very well expressed. ~ May the scales in your life be in perfect balance. Love, Peace, Light, & Harmony, Linda |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I LOVE THIS!!  Great write...muchly enjoyed! ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanking you all VERY much.... The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Each day in our lives can be a struggle to find that balance and just when you feel you find it, something tries to tip the scale. I think you know as well as I that there is only one true balance and that has to come within. I like this style and this thought process you give us today. Good to see you stretching your poetry horizons. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you Mark, you know I always appreciate the kindness and insightful wisdoms that you share. As for stretching my wings, I am sure there is much more to be accomplished. tis a learning thing....The greatest beauty on earth, is |
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