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Open Poetry #34

Two Left Feet

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2004-11-03 07:39 AM

Two Left Feet

I could write it
a million times
and it won’t
change a thing
if you can’t
hear the music
then the rhythm
just isn’t there
so you can’t
dance

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2004-11-03 08:26 AM

Two left feet on the floor and I have a feeling two left feet in life's dance also. Very direct and nice to read.

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

2 posted 2004-11-03 08:32 AM

Oh, yes - I have to agree with this. Well said!

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

3 posted 2004-11-03 03:44 PM

(smiling) a bit like the character in Iambe's series... some of us just never learn to dance...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2004-11-03 03:54 PM

Love this Helen!
Hugs~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

5 posted 2004-11-03 03:55 PM

brings up memories...

M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2004-11-03 09:26 PM

exactly

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