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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2004-11-02 09:06 PM


I wake in the morning
Look up at the mountain
The fog is thick
Then it desapates
And shows up again

When the fog does this
It looks like lovers dancing
Around and around
Showing that they love each other
And this they have no doubt

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Gaia
1 posted 2004-11-02 09:21 PM


Cool write Julie!
GG
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2 posted 2004-11-02 09:37 PM


I love the fog... it's frightening but beautiful. Yes, much like love. I haven't seen you around here much lately. Of course I've not been around enough to notice, maybe. Where have you been?

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

miscellanea
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3 posted 2005-02-10 12:26 PM


Sweet!  I don't think I'll ever picture fog quite the same after reading this.  A pleasure to read!

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