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Huan Yi
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Her womb
a gash
through which she was woundedó

I once
knew a woman
split
in two

© Copyright 2004 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
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interesting, i dont know the meaning you intended..but i take away my own thoughts on this....and the imagery is powerful, bold...
im keeping this for my library
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What muted said...
I'm not exactly sure what you mean by it. But anyone can take something from it and have it be powerful to them. I like that...
Well done

Always, Alyssa

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