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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2004-11-02 07:41 PM



Her womb
a gash
through which she was wounded—

I once
knew a woman
split
in two


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muted
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1 posted 2004-11-02 08:12 PM


interesting, i dont know the meaning you intended..but i take away my own thoughts on this....and the imagery is powerful, bold...
im keeping this for my library

GG
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2 posted 2004-11-02 09:35 PM


What muted said...
I'm not exactly sure what you mean by it. But anyone can take something from it and have it be powerful to them. I like that...
Well done

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

Drauntz
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3 posted 2007-05-15 12:33 PM


war
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