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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2004-11-02 07:01 PM


Your Precious Love
(fulfillment)

Open up your heart if you want
to reveal that love is real.
Some have been unappreciated
and so they knew not the
receiving of love.
Some did not know how to
appreciate, so they knew
not the giving of love.
To me, love is not fulfilled
by giving love, the fulfillment
is gained when you both give
and receive love.
Yes love is giving, and love
is receiving, and that is what
is so precious about love.
So don't give that which is
precious away to just anyone.
Find the one that is open
to love and affection, the
one who has the gift of love
to return in your direction.

JamesLee
November02
2004

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
1 posted 2004-11-02 08:21 PM


I liked what you had to say in this write James.  
Sometimes I think, there is a divine plan, and it doesn't always ask our permission...and sometimes we love in a one way direction.  
You write from the heart.
TD

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
2 posted 2004-11-02 08:30 PM


Very nice James...this came straight from your loving heart.
Hugs~

Now while the leaves still dance on the wind
While the moon and the clouds come spinning
Will you whisper my name again?
Again..and again.

lil' Angel
Member
since 2003-11-14
Posts 116

3 posted 2004-11-03 12:34 PM


That is so true.  Nice write.

Lil' Angel


"There is no wisdom, no insight, no plan that can succeed against the Lord."  Proverbs 21:30



ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2004-11-03 04:06 AM


Nice write James
This part is so true..
"So don't give that which is
precious away to just anyone"


Eric

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