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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Contact perhaps again to touch you as soft, a stroke on kitten’s fur allowing some purr of you to come forth grant me traces along a silhouette of you my finger outlining your memory defining on the back of my iris in long recall might you summon again my hand in yours how my skin awoke beneath the feel of you, with my lips on yours close your eyes envision contact |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Exquisite write dear Lady. So good to read you here today. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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DavePage Member Elite
since 2003-12-21
Posts 2917 |
Really enjoyed this Dave |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
close your eyes envision contact YES! This is it! Thank you Lady  Maree Oh, you speak to me in riddles |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms white I do love full contact sports are you busy for the next few months? I enjoyed this much |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
The longing touch and feel of contact most lovingly expressed Hope |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
might you summon again my hand in yours how my skin awoke beneath the feel of you, with my lips on yours close your eyes envision contact ============================== such a sweet seduction Lady... sensualy lovely in its wanting. Poetry is emotion put into measure. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yum...delicious...James |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lady JM said it the best...."sweet seduction". This is so softly sensual and lovely to read. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sensual and sweet |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Its just me...putting one of my favorites back on the top...James |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
grant me traces along a silhouette of you my finger outlining your memory defining on the back of my iris in long recall Soft, sensual seduction... exquisite is the word. *S* |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
i love this... ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Mmmmm... some things are even easier to see with eyes closed..... I like your style in this one....I call it open style, with just enough said to make the destination inevitable, but with no walls, no paths, no fences of language to take me there or block the view along the way. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Another lovely romantic poem. Must be a full moon out tonight! Deb |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
sweet seduction is a gross understatement. Well done LIW... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow! when you write I see the pictures in your head. Excellent! Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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myheart Member
since 2004-11-05
Posts 160lost in your eyes |
Yes, what Kethry said! |
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