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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2004-11-01 11:33 PM

Could never imagine the dedication
a monument constructed at an infant stage
ready for the ultimate incarceration
gesture to dieties that held the heavens
and coursed the river of reeds
out to the land of Goshen
where Ramses ruled the Isrealites
yet there lies an even larger Cheops
another marvel to man's ingenuity
if it was man's
or something out of Star Gate
where a ship landed via its pyramidal gears
emitted the strangest of hums to human ears
perhaps to leave a giant beacon behind
and in it eternal secrets one could find

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-02-2004 02:21 AM).]

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

1 posted 2004-11-02 09:41 AM

quite original stuff you have there Martin, great alternative to 'my heart aches for you tonight'poems...keep it up

froggy
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since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

2 posted 2004-11-02 04:11 PM

I like it
I love it
and you do it so well.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2004-11-03 12:52 PM

Hey E.J.

too bad about the results of tonight...
looks like you guys are going to have more of the same, thanks for your link now we have all the more reason to get our voices heard.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

4 posted 2004-11-03 01:10 AM

Definitely makes one think. I like that

You do have a different style, which is very good.

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

5 posted 2004-11-03 01:23 AM

think, whatever on earth for?..just a bit of my raw humour...we all do it, all the time whether reading poetry or not

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

6 posted 2004-11-03 01:37 AM

lol I'm sorry... I just think too much. I can't help it!

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

7 posted 2004-11-03 01:51 AM

and who said too much? I'd rather you and other poets exercise their right to reflect and think, you also have the right to question what's going to happen the next 4 years too!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2004-11-03 05:35 AM

I used to be fascinated as to what was here before me, how it got here, history...the story behind things, etc.

Now I suppose I'm getting old and I am not as curious

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