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S Arthur Grey
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0 posted 2004-11-01 10:17 PM



Ringing


My ears ring
one from all the screaming
and the other
in my long silence




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J.Samm
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1 posted 2004-11-01 10:24 PM


a short yet meaningful write...
GG
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2 posted 2004-11-01 10:52 PM


I think silence is the loudest thing I've ever heard. Probably the most painful sound I've heard, too. Enjoyed

Always, Alyssa

He was a man of sorrows
...I am a girl of tears.

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Gaia
3 posted 2004-11-01 10:55 PM


good to see you ringing in here
Enchantress
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4 posted 2004-11-01 11:05 PM


Excellent!  A perfect combo!
Good to read you here tonight.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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5 posted 2004-11-01 11:51 PM


Exactly like J.Samm said...
great write!

~Alli~

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passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-11-02 05:16 AM


neat write
babygirlwlove
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7 posted 2004-11-02 06:44 AM


oh my...

succint, yet speaks volumes...niiiicely done.

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Sunshine
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8 posted 2004-11-02 07:06 AM



And we realize just how deeply
this presses, Sir.  Thank you
for digging deep, and sharing well.

Ericc
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9 posted 2004-11-03 07:50 PM


Wow....!!!!

Eric

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