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ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state

0 posted 2004-11-01 08:38 PM



Aware that a leeward side is exposed
sand layer upon sediment then superimposed
swept away by the prevailing desert winds
at rest lies another pyramidal whim
who will know about the truth concealed
be conscious of a knowledgable windfall

one faces negation of present recourses
to avoid sure ruin of untapped resources
like new Dead Sea Scrolls unearthed
kept in unknown security vaults
why make a dent in established courses
and ruffle feathers of established forces
better to imagine history is all the same
some are luckier to operate its game.

so when artifacts see the light of day
check to see how history follows your way.



© Copyright 2004 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
1 posted 2004-11-01 08:40 PM


ENJOYED THIS for sure. Very, very well written.

jwesley

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923
my own state
2 posted 2004-11-01 08:45 PM


Thank you J.Wesley, I on the other hand would have liked to add more to its meager content.....always looking to elaborate well on a theme.


passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2004-11-01 09:04 PM


yes...a good write!
ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
4 posted 2004-11-01 11:25 PM


and the thurst for knowledge is never quenched..thanks Passing


froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan
5 posted 2004-11-02 04:13 PM


Will have to agree with Jwesley and passing shadows here.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
6 posted 2004-11-02 04:18 PM


like new Dead Sea Scrolls unearthed
kept in unknown security vaults

Excellent write,
Dead Sea Scroll Deception by Baigent/Leigh is a fantastic book on the subject if you're interested

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