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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2004-11-01 03:28 PM

The rain plays
without intermission

can't you hear the sky applauding?

along its orchestration,
the exodus
of leaves, release
all inhibitions,

for the moment
pathless, exempt
from destination,

unjaded as
the starlit children
kicking up
the colored mountains.

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (11-01-2004 08:00 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2004-11-01 03:35 PM

Ah, beautiful Michele!
Wonderful imagery,...much enjoyed.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

2 posted 2004-11-01 03:54 PM

(smiling)

nicely done ma'am... here the rain has stripped most leaf and left limbs.. stark grey in the wet cool of autumn to dance the wind and reach for the low grey clouds..

knock me off balance? why?

I continue to enjoy your words... and your connection to the trees..

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2004-11-01 04:29 PM

Yes, you have a special way to picture natural beauty.

Wonderfully done.

Love, Margherita

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2004-11-01 08:00 PM

Like starlit children...loved this especially...
Smiling in my heart. What a beautiful gift you have Inky.
TD

*Alli4000*

Member Elite

since 2004-03-21

Posts 3188
The World of Poetry

5 posted 2004-11-01 08:06 PM

"The rain plays
without intermission

can't you hear the sky applauding?

along its orchestration,
the exodus
of leaves, release
all inhibitions"

Amazing poem...loved that part.

~Alli~

*:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal
Don’t cry because it’s over, smile because it happened...

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

6 posted 2004-11-01 08:45 PM

Wow! Not only beautiful but v e r y deep.
Gonna be calling you... Guru.

j.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2004-11-01 08:46 PM

what a colorful scene!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

8 posted 2004-11-02 03:46 PM

the overview of this
like the sun peaking
between mountains
with a smile

enjoyed it ms

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

9 posted 2004-11-02 03:50 PM

Loved this .... it conjured up all sorts of wonderful images.

hugs, Marti

A single sunbeam is enough to drive away many shadows.
–St. Francis of Assisi

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

10 posted 2004-11-02 04:19 PM

I'm not around or as vocal, but will always l@ve your words M

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

11 posted 2004-11-03 07:47 PM

thank you my starlit children for stopping by

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