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Don_Juan
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Far from where I am going

0 posted 2004-11-01 03:05 PM


She stood there
under a maple
kissed by autumn.
leaning against the trunk
she looked out to the lake.
moon light swam
with water ripples
caused by tears.
she breathed
a sigh of longing
as her hair
ran fluently
with the wind.

she needs to be loved.

Her brilliantly bright
attentive and interested eyes
will bring him forth
while a smile
of pure radiance and beauty
will lock his heart
lovely lips
part ways
from one another
to let knowledge
and wisdom
ring from
a honey sweet voice

she is worth loving.

She laid
under an autumn kissed maple
leaves of bergundy and orange
hovering around
he amber aura
assimilating into
a sunrise embraced
water.
her soft smile apparent
and her bright eyes low
she welcomes
whatever is to come.

she will be loved.

( a poem for a friend. i hope you enjoy.)

nice use of muffin

© Copyright 2004 John Lervezuk - All Rights Reserved
DavePage
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since 2003-12-21
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1 posted 2004-11-01 03:20 PM


Well I certainly enjoyed it

Excellent

Dave

ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2004-11-01 07:56 PM


Romance is definitely your forte...
Lovely write.
TD

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3 posted 2004-11-01 08:14 PM


John...so you don't post in teen anymore!
I'm just kidding...you'll probably get more responses in open anyways.
Like always, a beautiful write!

~Alli~

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jwesley
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4 posted 2004-11-01 08:41 PM


Well done, my friend...indeed!

jwesley

Don_Juan
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Far from where I am going
5 posted 2004-11-01 10:27 PM


thanks everybody for reading it. Response make me feel all warm on the inside.
Yeah alli i don't post in the teen forum anymore for the exact reaso that you expressed. I felt that i would get more responses here than in the teen forum. also i was starting to enjoy the styles on this particular forum so i thought that i would give it a shot. Well anywho thank you all for reading

-Juancito

nice use of muffin

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2004-11-02 06:47 PM


Enjoyed...James
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