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ecrivan
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my own state

0 posted 2004-10-31 10:19 PM



A little late but nonetheless:


One would like to enjoy the evening
open the door to young goblins
on the phrase trick or treat
but there is always one daemon
who'll slip a blade in an apple
or throw in a rotten apple
parents accompany your kids on the run
keep them far from a real haunting
make sure he doesn't eat the loot
until all the goodies are carried home
important for the grown-up
to inspect the bounty
check the goods that your child collects
make sure the haunted evening
of  kids in pointed caps and black cats
ends on a positive note


[This message has been edited by ecrivan (11-01-2004 12:20 AM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2004-10-31 10:36 PM


It's never too late
for such a haunting...
and an early request
to rise this,
once again,
2005

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2004-10-31 10:38 PM


You got that right! No kids should be out running around on their own tonight, and the drivers need to be extra careful cuz those little demons don't always look before running across the street to the next trick or treat!
I've probably had over 75 kids here already!

ecrivan
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3 posted 2004-11-01 12:19 PM


oh my goodness what a load of cavities on their way..hehe


froggy
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4 posted 2004-11-01 01:36 PM


Hey ecrivan,
  going to print this one up for a friend
of mine who has kids.
Thanks for the reminder to all parents with
young children.

I really like this.

:-)

Within this heart you'll find love

ecrivan
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5 posted 2004-11-01 01:59 PM


Remember the petition I sent you last night
it's an issue that needs addressing...


passing shadows
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6 posted 2004-11-01 09:12 PM


enjoyed
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