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Sunshine
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0 posted 2004-10-31 09:53 PM





Pale Shade Moon

Artist’s brush of morning sun
First day after turn of time
Pale shade moon glowing light
Still in reach of mine

Reds and golds of green gone fall
Orange come yellows, too
Find me well in softest light
In early cool of dew

Leaf would hold still harvest moon
Gifts to bring my way
If I a moment could capture this
T‘would please my every day

Pale shade of moon gone light
Sun overtakes your means
Weave for me in morning bright
A fall to bring me dreams

Pale shade moon that harbors schemes
Bring to all, blessed imaginings.


© Copyright 2004 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2004-10-31 10:05 PM


Oh, you've got your sunshining brightly again,
this is a beaut!

Dark Angel
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2 posted 2004-11-01 06:11 AM


Smiling at you at this

it's gorgeous

Many hugs Kari  

Mxx

Oh, you speak to me in riddles
and you speak to me in rhymes
My body aches to breathe your breath
Your words keep me alive
~Sarah McLaughlan~

Honeybunch
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3 posted 2004-11-01 06:26 AM


"Pale shade of moon gone light
Sun overtakes your means
Weave for me in morning bright
A fall to bring me dreams"

Lovely!

Kit McCallum
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4 posted 2004-11-01 07:07 AM


"If I a moment could capture this
T‘would please my every day"

Ah, but you did capture this, my friend ... you did. Beautifully done. Such a lovely autumn read.

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

ice
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5 posted 2004-11-01 07:14 AM


A beautiful autumn song...I needed to sing one before I went to work..thanks for the lyrics...
---------ice/ford

Come read to me some poem,
Some simple and heartfelt lay,
That shall soothe this restless feeling
And banish the thoughts of day.
Longfellow

LeeJ
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6 posted 2004-11-01 08:47 AM


loved your new picture, your a beautiful lady, in heart mind and soul
outstanding picture, and october sounds...lovely

Enchantress
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7 posted 2004-11-01 08:56 AM


This is truly beautiful!
Love your new pic too!

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

Margherita
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8 posted 2004-11-01 04:08 PM


quote:
Pale shade moon that harbors schemes
Bring to all, blessed imaginings.





What a very special altruistic ending!

And a fantastic picture to go with.

Love, Margherita


Ericc
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9 posted 2004-11-01 04:33 PM


A beautiful picture...painted with words.

Eric

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10 posted 2004-11-01 09:13 PM


you always write of beauty
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11 posted 2004-11-01 09:18 PM


this piece definitely awakens fall in me...

love the new picture,

and I agree with the "you're a beautiful lady...in all respects..." but nothing's changed there since I've be aquainted with you....


jimmy

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