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Paradise (CBE) |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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And so what do I say to you Look The sun just going down below the trees The lake’s waves lapping against the shore Ship lights gliding out from Sault Saint Marie Listen How the crickets sing |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You paint a beautiful scene of a place that many wish to have seen, and only dream of. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiufl! My mother was from the Sault. Michigan side..lovely. well done. Hugs~ ~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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*Alli4000*
since 2004-03-21
Posts 3188The World of Poetry |
I can actually envision myself being there. *sigh* ~Alli~ *:.AIM = Alli4000.:* My Journal |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
Need say no more. |
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Drauntz Member Elite
since 2007-03-16
Posts 2905Los Angeles California |
Here goes the CBE, down....brush....up =say...scene...listen three movements. enjoyed your paradise. beautiful and simple but it is dark. enjoyed. |
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