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Paradise (CBE)

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Huan Yi
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0 posted 10-31-2004 06:10 PM       View Profile for Huan Yi   Email Huan Yi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Huan Yi


And so
what do I say to you

Look  The sun
just going down
below the trees

The lakeís waves
lapping against the shore

Ship lights
gliding out from Sault Saint Marie

Listen
How the crickets sing

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1 posted 10-31-2004 06:19 PM       View Profile for Magnus   Email Magnus   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Magnus

You paint a beautiful scene of a place that
many wish to have seen,  and only dream of.
Enchantress
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Beautiufl!
My mother was from the Sault.
Michigan side..lovely.
well done.
Hugs~

~Autumn..the year's last, loveliest smile.~

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JamesMichael
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Enjoyed...James
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5 posted 11-01-2004 11:46 PM       View Profile for *Alli4000*   Email *Alli4000*   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for *Alli4000*

I can actually envision myself being there. *sigh*

~Alli~

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S Arthur Grey
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Need say no more.
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Here goes the CBE, down....brush....up
=say...scene...listen
three movements.  

enjoyed your paradise. beautiful and simple but it is dark.

enjoyed.
 
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